7 comments on “Beyond Rainbow

  1. Astonishingly beautiful. I could see the whole thing in my mind. She is so particular in her description of the colors that an artist would have to work very hard to capture the effect. But I’d like to see it as a painting, or a movie, anyway!

  2. A beautiful story with such vivid images! I specifically loved the very first line! ;)

    Amazing work. I’d love to read more!

  3. Excellent story. Beautifully written. The images reminded me of the gardens below Edinburgh castle on Princes Street. One of the loveliest places on the planet. Thank you. Nicely done.

  4. What a beautiful story. Not only was it vivid, but the end of the story made me go, “Oh!”. Thank you for sharing this!

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