3 comments on “The Noise

  1. I really enjoyed your story. I especially liked how you used the nicknames “Kostya” and “Sveta” to give it an authentic feel. The ending felt ominous, in a good way. I liked the inevitability of going deeper.

  2. I agree with Noticed. Both the use of nicknames and the ending were things I really enjoyed about this story.

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