6 comments on “What You Can Change

  1. This story gripped me from the beginning (I’m a sucker for dystopias and mysterious twins) and didn’t disappoint. Intriguing and chilling with a great last line.

    • I’m so glad that you liked it, Jillian. And I love your comment about the last line — I remember making a comment when I wrote this story that the last line had given *me* a chill. :)

  2. I was planning on just scanning the first few paragraphs and coming back later, but couldn’t stop reading – amazing story!

  3. Dorothy and Sue,

    Thank you so much for your comments on this story. It’s nice to know it’s struck a chord with readers.

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